I am searching for your prep on the bullet points, introductory sentence, topic sentences due in today 06.11.13.
You seem to have made very slow progress, Harriet. Where is the third choice?The first is rich in detail, especially contextual detail (war) but the second is lacking. I'd pick another.Grade D
I am searching for your prep on the bullet points, introductory sentence, topic sentences due in today 06.11.13.
ReplyDeleteYou seem to have made very slow progress, Harriet. Where is the third choice?
ReplyDeleteThe first is rich in detail, especially contextual detail (war) but the second is lacking. I'd pick another.
Grade D